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By the time the new librarian finished cataloging the rare-book collection, previous staff members ______ several volumes to other…

By the time the new librarian finished cataloging the rare-book collection, previous staff members ______ several volumes to other institutions without proper documentation.

Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?

Answer and explanation

Answer: C: had transferred

Two events occur at different points in the past: the undocumented transfers happened first, and the new librarian's completion of cataloging happened afterward, revealing what had already occurred. That earlier-past-before-a-later-past sequence calls for the past perfect, *had transferred*. *Transfer* is present tense and doesn't fit a narrative set in the past. *Transferred* places both events at the same rough time, losing the sequence. *Have transferred* incorrectly ties the transfers to the present moment instead of to a point before the cataloging was finished.

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