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The writer is considering adding the following sentence: "A transit map, for example, can show not only where a bus traveled but also…

Draft: preserving ordinary records

1Local archives naturally collect documents connected to major institutions and public events. [Sentence 1] City council minutes, election records, and photographs of landmark buildings can tell future researchers a great deal about a community.

2[Sentence 2] Yet a town's daily life also leaves behind evidence that rarely looks important at the moment it is created. Restaurant menus record prices and changing tastes. Bus schedules show which neighborhoods were connected and how often. Flyers reveal which concerts, meetings, language classes, and services residents could actually find. Even a handwritten notice taped to a shop window can preserve information that no formal report contains.

3[Sentence 3] Because such materials are temporary, archives should establish simple procedures for collecting a small, representative sample of them. The collection does not need every receipt or every flyer. Selection is part of archival work. A rotating set of neighborhood businesses, transit routes, community organizations, and public notices could provide a record broad enough to be useful without overwhelming storage systems.

4[Sentence 4] Future historians will still need official records, but those records become more informative when they can be read beside the traces of ordinary routines.

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The writer is considering adding the following sentence: "A transit map, for example, can show not only where a bus traveled but also which destinations a city treated as connected." Where would the sentence best be placed?

Answer and explanation

Answer: A: After the sentence about bus schedules in paragraph 2

The transit-map sentence explains what a researcher can infer from a bus route, so it belongs immediately after the bus-schedule example, where it develops that evidence while it is fresh. That makes A correct. Choice B is tempting because added examples can enrich a draft, but after the final sentence it would blunt the conclusion. Choice C comes before temporary everyday records have been introduced, so the reference is premature. Choice D places an example into a paragraph about collection strategy, interrupting its reasoning about selection.

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